Hi there
For you to ask a critical view of your paintings you need to attach a lot more of your paintings old and new, you need to show your mini biography of each painting and explain the paintings on details why you paint, what do you paint, why, how did you start to paint so one can create an idea on the styles and techniques of your art but also you need to show your mini biograpfy.
Organize a proper portofolio of you and your paintings try to answer all questions one will ask you about your art and plese explain what is in the painting and how did you do it and with what materials.
I am sorry but only attaching 2 fotograps of what you claim to be your paintings is not a good start for you or your art. And one more tip Build a collection of detailed in and out 30 to 50 paintings before you even bother pestering galleries.