Hey im kinda new at this and i just want to know what ppl think of some of my poems... thanx:-)

Satisfaction

I feel the urge once again
The rush of energy through my body
The balde, the flesh
As One.
The first straight cut
The beautiful flow of red
Go hand-in-hand
With this outstanding feeling.
My blood drips down
Like a melted ice cream cone
On a hot summers day
It sparks and old flame.
My stress, pain and anger
All pour out
As I take the plunge
Deeper, Harder, Longer!
I feel my stomach turn
In anticipaion of the next cut
The sweet satisfaction
Savours on my lips.
I look at myself
With a disgusted smile upon my face
This is the end...
I finally see the light!